Wednesday, 20 February 2013

The Most Amazing Thing Ever!

One year ago, I saw the most amazing thing in the world.  It was a tarantula.  I saw it on the road.  Me and Mum ran it over in the car.  The tarantula was flattened by the car.  I forgot to tell you this...it was in Australia.  

By William

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  1. I liked it when you said ,you ran it over

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    1. I liked that part to.

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  2. Hi William
    Great to see you are publishing your work. I loved how you used the word 'flattened' to describe the spider as it painted a picture in my mind. A bit sad for the poor spider but it's probably the only way I'd like to meet one! - Mrs Wood :)

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  3. Great work william you are awesome FERGUS

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  4. good job william
    from finn

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  5. I liked reading it william. I like the bit when you said I forgot to tell you this was in australia

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  6. Hi William great job. Grace

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  7. awesome story william. great job.

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  8. I agre william.

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