Wednesday, 20 February 2013

Orana Park

Last year, I went to Orana Park with my family.  I watched a lion show.  People were in the cage feeding lions.  The people held food out.  There were four lions.  They were yellow and orange.  It didn't have a big, bushy mane.  It had big whiskers.  It was huge and made a loud noise.

By Max

6 comments:

  1. I like how you decribd the lions keep it up

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  2. Hi Max
    It's fantastic to see you have a published piece of writing. I really enjoyed reading about your visit to Orana Park and the description of the lion show. I wonder what your heart was doing as you watched it? What were you feeling? Keep up the great writing - Mrs Wood :)

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  3. how does people get in the cage

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    1. they pay almost 200$

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  4. I liked the word bushy max from Finn

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  5. Love your snow story max from Lucas

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