My brother and I were playing wrestling. Then my brother didn't play by the rules. I was furious. I stomped into my room and slammed the door, and said words that I shouldn't. When I slammed the door, the door handle came off.
I was forlorn and frustrated. I felt like punching and kicking. I was fed up. I was cantankerous.
My brother was waiting for me to come out of my room. But I wouldn't come out of my room. He finally went away.
THANK GOODNESS!
By Olivia
I like how you used furious. from riley
ReplyDeletei like when you said cantankerous, furious, and wrestling.
ReplyDeleteCool Story Livy.I love how you said I was forlorn and frustrated.
ReplyDelete- Jodie-Anne :-D
I loved your good words.
ReplyDeleteI like the word "cantankerous" from Jack M
ReplyDeletei like how olivia put in the door handle came off by samuel m
ReplyDeletegood morning olivia nice story i liked the word thank goodness!
ReplyDeleteby rishabh
Olivia I like the way you you used thank goodness by maddie
ReplyDeleteIf you right about ANGERY again you could use the word fury and I liked how you said I stomped into my bed room.
ReplyDeleteEmma!
I like the way that you said cantankerous and furious
ReplyDeleteI LIKE THE WORED THANK GOODNESS. BY JUDD
ReplyDeleteI LIKE THE PART WHEN IT SAY,S WHEN I SLAMMED THE DOOR THE DOOR HANDEL CAME OFF.
ReplyDeleteGreat writing olivia I love your describing words - from Symone
ReplyDeleteI like the way you said furious and cantankerous naomi
ReplyDeleteHy Olivia, I think you should use some other words like roepeable and and stuff like that
ReplyDeleteWow livvy you used so many awesome describing words what a cool story!!! lots of love Mum xxx
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