Hi Finn. This is a very nicely constructed poem. I really like the way you have used words to paint a very clear picture of an autumn day.Mr Newton
great poem finn.jodie-anne
I love the image you have created by the use of the term "leaf tornado"... It really puts an image in my mind of leaves swirling and twirling...
well done finn this is a GREAT poem I really enjoyed reeding it on the room 10 blog!!
This is a cool poem from fergus
Love the words you used-jodie-anne
hi finn I like story from william
hi finn naomi here love your words that you used Naomi
AWSOME FINN YOUR MY BEST FRIENDFROM SAMUEL DC
Finn you are good writing. Alex
i like it-tremain
Hi FinnGreat to see your writing published. I really liked your line about leaf tornadoes as this painted a fabulous picture in my mind and I knew exactly what you meant. Keep up the great writing. Mrs Wood :)
Hi finn, amazing writing.I love the end part of your story.From Sam Williams